I once wrote for others
chaps so full of literature,
they would puke sonnets.
Women with legs
wearing beautiful stockings
looking like Ballads.
But they never read.
They were so full of themselves
and I wasn’t full of myself anywhere,
It took me a year of my life
to realize that
I won’t be full of myself
anytime soon.
You fuckers reading this.
Let me know,
When I’m Done.
I’d very much like to be included in the narrative.
Count me in.
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Sure Thing π I would.
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You write so beautifully. But why so sour?
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Call it the bitter truth.. that smells like sourness.
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Look I’m not trying to comfort you, if anyhow you’re hurt. But honestly, you’re great. And I believe, everything deserves a second chance, even ugly pasts:)
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What I’ve tried to say through this poem is one should stop writing to please others.. you should keep writing till you feel the fountain of imagination runs empty or someone tells you are done. Stop.. rethink and then write again.
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Yes, I get that, ofcourse. But to me, it rather sounded like you’re cross or something, as if you were done pleasing others. I just meant, chill and don’t be cross, you’re more than pleasing and amazing.
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I would take this a good compliment π
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It was meant to be.
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π
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Oh!π
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Thumbs Up! You ain’t done yet – fat lady has yet to sing! π
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Sure Dabir. π
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Well the audience has not yet had its fill…so pour on…
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Sure thing.
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